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	<title>Comments on: Chapter Two: Tombs, Tunes and Jello</title>
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		<title>By: Peter Newman</title>
		<link>http://lastmage.com/chapters/chapter-two-tombs-tunes-and-jello/comment-page-1#comment-411</link>
		<dc:creator>Peter Newman</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 04 Feb 2012 19:14:36 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>So, here I am at Chapter 2.

The best sign for any serial is that people keep reading it.

Enjoying it so far, see you at Chapter 3!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>So, here I am at Chapter 2.</p>
<p>The best sign for any serial is that people keep reading it.</p>
<p>Enjoying it so far, see you at Chapter 3!</p>
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		<title>By: The Origic Codex</title>
		<link>http://lastmage.com/chapters/chapter-two-tombs-tunes-and-jello/comment-page-1#comment-409</link>
		<dc:creator>The Origic Codex</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 03 Feb 2012 14:28:56 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Athena,

Thanks for stopping by. I knew that putting ads up on Weregeek would be a bit of a stretch, but I felt it accurately reflected my humor. 

The best advice that I can give is to just start writing. I find that a lot of people starting to write either hesitate to begin because they feel they might not be good or they plan a great deal before they get down to the page. Just write. You won&#039;t know if the brilliant story in your head is just that brilliant or needs work until you start it. And, regardless of the outcome, you gain benefits.

First, you&#039;ll gain experience in putting your ideas on the page. You&#039;ll learn how to capture your own unique voice in words. Second, if it&#039;s &quot;good&quot; you&#039;ll learn where you excel. If it&#039;s &quot;bad&quot; you&#039;ll learn where you need to focus development. Last, when you&#039;re done, you&#039;ll have something concrete, something that you can point to (whether or not you allow anyone to read it :D) and say &quot;I wrote this. I have set a goal and met it.&quot;

Thanks for the tip on the typo. I&#039;ll fix that as soon as I can!

Good luck with your writing and shoot me a link if you decide to put it up somewhere.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Athena,</p>
<p>Thanks for stopping by. I knew that putting ads up on Weregeek would be a bit of a stretch, but I felt it accurately reflected my humor. </p>
<p>The best advice that I can give is to just start writing. I find that a lot of people starting to write either hesitate to begin because they feel they might not be good or they plan a great deal before they get down to the page. Just write. You won&#8217;t know if the brilliant story in your head is just that brilliant or needs work until you start it. And, regardless of the outcome, you gain benefits.</p>
<p>First, you&#8217;ll gain experience in putting your ideas on the page. You&#8217;ll learn how to capture your own unique voice in words. Second, if it&#8217;s &#8220;good&#8221; you&#8217;ll learn where you excel. If it&#8217;s &#8220;bad&#8221; you&#8217;ll learn where you need to focus development. Last, when you&#8217;re done, you&#8217;ll have something concrete, something that you can point to (whether or not you allow anyone to read it :D) and say &#8220;I wrote this. I have set a goal and met it.&#8221;</p>
<p>Thanks for the tip on the typo. I&#8217;ll fix that as soon as I can!</p>
<p>Good luck with your writing and shoot me a link if you decide to put it up somewhere.</p>
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		<title>By: Athena</title>
		<link>http://lastmage.com/chapters/chapter-two-tombs-tunes-and-jello/comment-page-1#comment-408</link>
		<dc:creator>Athena</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 03 Feb 2012 04:07:49 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>So I found this today courtesy of a webcomic called Weregeek. It was in the add banner at the top of the page. I generally look at those to try and find new webcomics. The quote that I found up there was intriguing and so I clicked on it. I am enjoying the story and I have found the style to be simmaler to Tamora Peirce&#039;s Beka Cooper series. 

I did have a question though. Do you have any advice that you could give me on writing, as I am trying to write a story myself? Anything would help.

Also I found an another typo. &quot;king Rihennon the third&quot; should be &quot;King Rihennon the Third&quot;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>So I found this today courtesy of a webcomic called Weregeek. It was in the add banner at the top of the page. I generally look at those to try and find new webcomics. The quote that I found up there was intriguing and so I clicked on it. I am enjoying the story and I have found the style to be simmaler to Tamora Peirce&#8217;s Beka Cooper series. </p>
<p>I did have a question though. Do you have any advice that you could give me on writing, as I am trying to write a story myself? Anything would help.</p>
<p>Also I found an another typo. &#8220;king Rihennon the third&#8221; should be &#8220;King Rihennon the Third&#8221;</p>
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		<title>By: John</title>
		<link>http://lastmage.com/chapters/chapter-two-tombs-tunes-and-jello/comment-page-1#comment-159</link>
		<dc:creator>John</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 20 Aug 2010 14:55:16 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Excellent story! Thanks for this!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Excellent story! Thanks for this!</p>
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		<title>By: The Origic Codex</title>
		<link>http://lastmage.com/chapters/chapter-two-tombs-tunes-and-jello/comment-page-1#comment-154</link>
		<dc:creator>The Origic Codex</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 18 Aug 2010 14:54:45 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Ah, great catch! Good to have you from Station V3!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Ah, great catch! Good to have you from Station V3!</p>
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		<title>By: ConcreteDonkey</title>
		<link>http://lastmage.com/chapters/chapter-two-tombs-tunes-and-jello/comment-page-1#comment-148</link>
		<dc:creator>ConcreteDonkey</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 17 Aug 2010 08:26:37 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Another typo for you.
&quot;The bleeps and sounds of death coming from the boys game were only a minor distraction.&quot;
&quot;boys&quot; is missing an apostrophe.

And since the person before me mentioned it, figure I might as well mention that I came over from Station V3 via an ad as well.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Another typo for you.<br />
&#8220;The bleeps and sounds of death coming from the boys game were only a minor distraction.&#8221;<br />
&#8220;boys&#8221; is missing an apostrophe.</p>
<p>And since the person before me mentioned it, figure I might as well mention that I came over from Station V3 via an ad as well.</p>
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		<title>By: Richard Carson</title>
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		<dc:creator>Richard Carson</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 27 Jun 2010 07:41:28 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>3 uncapitalised i - 2 at the beginning of Part 2 - near Amazon/squeebles, 1 near yoghurt

Awesome story so far :D
I don&#039;t normally click on ads, but I came here from http://www.stationv3.com/ via a banner ad.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>3 uncapitalised i &#8211; 2 at the beginning of Part 2 &#8211; near Amazon/squeebles, 1 near yoghurt</p>
<p>Awesome story so far :D<br />
I don&#8217;t normally click on ads, but I came here from <a href="http://www.stationv3.com/" rel="nofollow">http://www.stationv3.com/</a> via a banner ad.</p>
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		<title>By: The Origic Codex</title>
		<link>http://lastmage.com/chapters/chapter-two-tombs-tunes-and-jello/comment-page-1#comment-113</link>
		<dc:creator>The Origic Codex</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 10 Jun 2010 13:24:07 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks for the catches! Also, enjoy chapters 3 and 4!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks for the catches! Also, enjoy chapters 3 and 4!</p>
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		<title>By: Rachel</title>
		<link>http://lastmage.com/chapters/chapter-two-tombs-tunes-and-jello/comment-page-1#comment-112</link>
		<dc:creator>Rachel</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 10 Jun 2010 07:54:16 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Found a typo, paragraph 4 should be &quot;country&#039;s behalf&quot; not &quot;county&#039;s behalf&quot;. And “Given you involvement with United States&quot; should be &quot;your&quot;. 
Also, I can&#039;t wait to see what on earth could be terrorizing an obscure part of Mexico.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Found a typo, paragraph 4 should be &#8220;country&#8217;s behalf&#8221; not &#8220;county&#8217;s behalf&#8221;. And “Given you involvement with United States&#8221; should be &#8220;your&#8221;.<br />
Also, I can&#8217;t wait to see what on earth could be terrorizing an obscure part of Mexico.</p>
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		<title>By: Alyssa</title>
		<link>http://lastmage.com/chapters/chapter-two-tombs-tunes-and-jello/comment-page-1#comment-110</link>
		<dc:creator>Alyssa</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 10 Jun 2010 03:26:15 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I like it thanks</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I like it thanks</p>
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