Thank you for reading! I really get a kick out of knowing others are enjoying the story as much as I am.

I am finding your storyline quite interesting. It’s keeping me from doing my work…hehe. There is only one minor problem, and it has more to do with the page structure than the story itself. I noticed that you have bookmarked each part within a chapter and provided a link to the parts, but once done, I have to scroll to the top (or use ctrl home, if I know that) to go to the top to get to the next chapter. Would it not be better to have either a link at the bottom of the page to go to the next chapter, or at least a link to the top from each part?

Thanks for the great read!

“one man can, indeed throw the”
I would think either two commas (“, indeed,”) or none.

“he made for our first”
Seems like “we made…” would be what you meant.

“Farmer Heller was, understandably upset”
Same as first.

“I retrospect, the snarkiness”
“In retropect….”

“events seem to he accelerating”
“be accelerating”

“it seemed as if he died.”
“as if he had died,” perhaps?

“The Noah’s arc Flood”
“The Noah’s Ark Flood”

“the Inquisition”
“the Inquisition” (had double space)

“some of them described”
“Some of them described” (capitalization)

“of a good an proper Seer”
“of a good and proper Seer”

“she’d probably procures”
“she’d probably procured”

“tablet much like what what I’d held”
“tablet much like what I’d held”

“As far as…knew, the Office of Extra-Natural Affairs, was woefully underfunded.”
“As far as…knew, the Office of Extra-Natural Affairs was woefully underfunded.”

“Sounds warped in to long, drawn tones,”
“Sounds warped into long, drawn tones,”

“Water fell around them,”
“Water fell around them,” (double space)

“two legs, hed and torso”
“two legs, head and torso”

“‘Do you have a theory, yet?’ Michelle asked, frowning over at him.”
“‘Do you have a theory, yet?’ Michelle asked, frowning over at me.” (She’s talking to the Mage, right?)

“‘Alright.’ and like that she let the matter drop, for now.”
Seems like either
“‘Alright,’ and like that she let the matter drop, for now.”, or
“‘Alright.’ And like that she let the matter drop, for now.” Inconvenient technicality, though.

“those whose only am is to”
“those whose only aim is to”

“the Event was, essentially a result”
Same as first.

So, yeah! Good story! Thanks!

I -> A

knack asking in asking questions without quite asking them.

At least one too many askings?

you all are as docile as, well, a flock of emus.

all are -> are all

The Wr4iter considered this.

hat leader becomes n untouchable martyr.

n -> an

Event was, essentially a result of conflict,

was, essentially -> was essentially